Wednesday, November 6, 2013

BOO-YA!!!

Shay She wrote a story about a guy who fell in love with people dying. So when girls would get to close to him he would gust kill them so they couldn’t find out about his plane. I loved the way she changed the point of views of the characters from the guy to the girl.

Danielle she wrote a story about a girl who lives by an old house that had burned down. Who is brought into the house by a little girl that plans on never letting her go. I liked the way she used details to help use picture it even better.

Gabby She wrote a story about a girl who was kidnapped in the night and taken to a van. She escapes by fighting her way back home. I loved the little plot twist toads the end where the man’s not dead and tries to kill her again, only for him to get his butt handed to him.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for using my cheesy BOO-YA! :) So far you're the only person I've seen who did...

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